Briggs
Spencer Carhart
Dr.
Stephanie Brown, Ph.D.
ENGL
306
15
September 2016
The Rhetoric of the Pulse Shooting
Aftermath
On the morning of June 12, 2016, waking
up to a notification about a mass shooting at the Pulse Nightclub in Orlando,
Florida became a haunting occurrence for most Americans. Pulse, an LGBTQ
nightclub, exists currently at the site of the worst mass shooting in American
history with 49 deaths and 53 wounded ("Pulse Nightclub Shooting: June 13,
2016 Update."). The event left families and friends (especially those of the
LGBTQ community) shaken and broken by the unexpected deaths of many lives
closely associated with their own. After the shooting, the conversation of the
aftermath focused around the shooter, Omar Mateen, with multiple theories,
including terrorism ideologies, as possible motives ("Pulse Nightclub
Shooting: June 13, 2016 Update."). The LGBTQ community, however, felt a
lack of support when a dichotomy of undesired responses flooded social media regarding
the Pulse shooting: arguments bolstering the shooting and apologetic statements
lacking acknowledgments of the LGBTQ community. The Pulse nightclub, two weeks
after the shooting, posted a photo on social media as an act of protest targeting
those who oppose the LGBTQ community to create solidarity amongst those who identify
as LGBTQ or as an ally.
The community felt disdain from individuals
who appreciated the violence (such as the Westboro Baptist Church) but also felt
isolated from individuals who opposed the violence. For the groups/people who
enjoyed the deaths and injuries from the Pulse shooting, made public statements
including, “God sent the shooter to #Pulse” (Cox). The LGBTQ community faces
threats everyday referencing religious ideology, but the extreme context in
lieu of the tragedy set those particular comments apart – affirming there is an
extreme safety concern for those who identify as LGBTQ. This sort of behavior
isn’t surprising, but it is a problem the LGBTQ community faces towards the
goal/process of social justice. An issue that has also been a point of concern
has been the overshadowing of the problem with the focus of terrorism with no
mention of the victims specifically. Donald J. Trump tweets, “Appreciate the
congrats for being right on radical Islamic terrorism, I don't want congrats, I
want toughness & vigilance. We must be smart!”( Nelson, L and Golshan T). The
nature of the comment put the major focus terrorism (which in itself has been a
controversial talking point). Terrorism is a major problem the United States is
facing and is emphasized in almost every political debate. Comments similar to
Mr. Trump’s blurs the context of the tragedy. It made the event another event
to extrapolate for future debates about terrorism (especially focused around
Islam). Comparing the people for the violence and against the violence, the
LGBTQ community is receiving the end of the stick.
These
comments don’t exemplify how the entire population feels about the event. The
amount of support is strong, but the LGBTQ community (generalized from the actions
of the Pulse nightclub) wants to divert the focus from terrorism or gun
violence into a focus of solidarity to those who identify LGBTQ. On June 30th,
2016, Pulse released a photo on Twitter stating, “You cannot silence us. You
cannot destroy us. We are not going anywhere” (Pulse Nightclub; Figure 1).
The photo is directed at those who are
against the LGBTQ community, in one or more ways, as well as the people who
leave out the identity of the club when discussing the shooting. The statement
brings up past issues encompassing sexual minorities with emphasis on “silence
us” referring to the Don’t Ask, Don’t Tell policy in the United States
military; the “destroy us” referring to the actual events at the Pulse
nightclub in Orlando. However, there were many individuals who lost their
lives, but the “us” in both statements is to people who identify as LGBTQ. Pulse’s
photo is referring to methods others have attempted to utilize to rid the world
of LGBTQ individuals’ way of life. The post was still around the timeframe of
the shooting, so emotions and theories and investigations were persisting at
high frequency and high intensity. This gave the opportunity to have the protest
have the most effect, and to change the conversation – to unify the community
in order to have the potential to change how the world perceive those who identify
as LGBTQ. The post gives the community a firm stance with the last statement “we
are not going anywhere.” Whether a gay male living in Orlando reads it hanging
in nightclub, or a non-gender conforming person reads the post on twitter. It
gives an overarching claim of all individuals and how the community is strong.
Attempts will be made to target the community, but the attempts will never lead
to success. That is the message this piece of protest establishes for the community.
In order to display an effective
message that will achieve the purpose of solidarity against the non-allies, multiple
methods of rhetorical strategies (like ethos, logos, and pathos). The rhetor establishes
a form of ethos by being the Pulse nightclub and having the logo on the poster.
Since majority of the conflict at the time of the photo’s release was about the
Pulse shooting, it gives message that will be received more. Also the photo has
the rainbow incorporated in the logo, which is the symbol for the LGBTQ
community (each color having its own meaning for the community). People usually
desire to communicate with “one of their own,” so the statements will be
supported more. Since the targeted audience isn’t “one of their own,” however,
the rainbow says that the rhetor is part of the community in question and is
more appropriate as a speaker about the issue. For a logos appeal, the short
statements make a clear and concise argument. Stating “we are not going
anywhere” and alluding to past examples that bolster the statement, presents a
stronger argument that the community isn’t really going anywhere. No one should
be afraid to express themselves, so the nightclub presenting how much the community
went through and that the community has sustained gives a better chance for
solidarity the more people who identify LGBTQ and see the photo. The most
effective strategy is pathos for this piece of protest. The connotative diction
“destroy” and “silence” elicit an emotional response because the audience to
create a connection between the cause and the intent of the message for
community. Also, the Pulse logo being in the shape of the heart presents the
LGBTQ communities message of love because that is what the community is about. No
one should try and destroy that.
That was the idea with this photo.
The shooting was a tragic event that caused speculations and uproar within the
country because of the amount of casualties. It’s an event that shook the general
population, but it hit close to home for those who identify as
lesbian/gay/bisexual/transgender/queer/questioning/etc. The movement for
equality has been ongoing, but it’s unfortunate that its events like the Pulse
shooting that have people advocating more for the cause – however there are
more people advocating against it. That’s why Pulse took advantage to rise from
the ashes to make a statement to form solidarity and hopefully create a world
of more understanding and peace – hopefully, another message doesn’t need to be
read in spite of 49 fatal bullets.
Works Cited
Cox, Daniel. “Westboro Baptist Church
Celebrates Pulse Nightclub Shooting in Orlando: ‘God Sent the Shooter’. The Inquistr. 12 June
2016.
Nelson, L and Golshan T. “Hillary
Clinton, Bernie Sanders, and Donald Trump react to Pulse nightclub shooting.”
Vox Policy and Politics. 12 June 2016.
"Pulse Nightclub Shooting: June 13,
2016 Update." City of Orlando. 2 Sep 2016.
http://www.cityoforlando.net/police/pulse-nightclub-shooting-june-13-2016-update/
Pulse Nightclub. “Orlando Shooting at Pulse
Nightclub.” Orlando Sentinel. 12 June 2016.
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed with Brigg’s paper and the content and how eloquently it is written. The thing I really appreciate about it is how straight forward the approach is. You touch on a lot on the emotions evoked by such a senseless tragedy. There is a lot of information in there and it can either be a double edged sword, it can give the reader plenty of info which might have not been known otherwise, but can also come off as overwhelming to the reader. I liked how you sway back and forth between being showing a somber express of sadness while writing with an edge that encompasses the resiliency of those effected.
The structure is well organized and it makes for an easy read. Perhaps tighten up the introduction and not have it carry on so much, but that’s just me being picky, its actually really nice because its not necessarily info that doesn’t belong, it all belongs there.
I like the tie in with politicians using the tragedy as a way to promote the threat of terrorism while not showing remorse to the victims. There’s definitely a lot of emotion evoked with this paper, but that’s what the event did as well. A great job writing about something that can be difficult to discuss. You made it more about how people everywhere can be resilience in the face of hate and not about terrorism which others might have used that approach, so good job on that bruh!
You did a great job at outlining context, audience, and purpose. I was a little confused by some of the sentence structure which disrupted the flow of the reading a bit, but you were able to reign it in and clarify some of that in other parts of paragraph. "Comparing the people for the violence and against the violence, the LGBTQ community is receiving the end of the stick.", this confused me. " In order to display an effective message that will achieve the purpose of solidarity against the non-allies, multiple methods of rhetorical strategies (like ethos, logos, and pathos)" also this. They seem like half of a sentence, and I can generally piece together where you're going with it but I'm speculating more than anything. I like that theres a clear connection with the voice and the rhetoric. It's clear that this is a topic close to you and you manage to not let that effect the argument in a detrimental or one sided way. You're invested and reasonable so I want to be invested. The ethos, logos, pathos portion was a little short, and possibly could make a reference or two back to other points in the paper, maybe the 'targeted audience isn't "one of their own" could reference specific people or groups? I'm probably grasping at straws here. Or just expand on the ideas in more detail more. Pretty much just a few local adjustments, you've put the paper together really well, you've articulated a good argument, and informed without excess.
ReplyDeleteRevision Plan (micro):
ReplyDeleteReread for confusing sentences (either grammatically or very weird phrasing)
Expand on examples pointed out by groups
Make comments less dense in certain regions.
Research common idioms and how to use them correctly.
Fix Works Cited formatting
Add context about LatinX