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Sunday, December 4, 2016

Final Research Paper

John Chestnut
Dr. Stephanie Brown
ENGL 306
Research Project Final Essay

Hope, Oppression, two words with different meanings yet two words that were brought closer together because of the work the Black Panther Party did during the Civil Rights movement in the 60’s. Started from the dream of two men, Huey Newton and Bobby Seale, this group that some would label as radicals, would forever change laws and help fight oppressions by any means necessary. The Black Panthers stood for hope for many and also stood for what is right. Their brand of justice could be labeled as extreme, but it was effective nonetheless. They were a group that fought for ending of not only oppression, but also equality not only on the streets, but equality throughout schools, the medical and job field. Their impact on society is still felt to this day.
            In the beginning two men had a dream, Bobby Seale and Huey P. Newton met at Merritt College. Huey had just received a month long prison sentence for a knife assault right before he met Seale. (Caprini 191) The US was caught in the middle of the Vietnam war with many young African American men being drafted into the war. Seale and Newton each believed that African American men being drafted over to fight for a country that didn’t believe in being just to them was ludicrous. Thus, The Black Panthers were born. (Nelson, Black Panthers Vanguard of the Revolution)
            Seale and Newton would begin to build their party with anybody who had a want and desire to end oppression and bring equality to all. The BPP developed a ten-point program which was a list of what they felt they needed to be changed in order to obtain the equality they were fighting for. The ten-point program was listed out in this order, freedom and full employment opportunities. They wanted to bring down the capitalism that they felt was robbing their communities. They wanted equal housing, schooling, medical care and equality from a technological standpoint, but not just for African Americans, but for all people who were oppressed during those times. They also wanted to bring an end to the police brutality that was taking place all across Oakland and the nation. At the time, the Vietnam War was being fought anf they also wanted to find a way to bring an end to that so that no one would have to sacrifice their body, and finally they wanted a fair justice system that gave everyone a fair trial. (North American Review 16-17)
            Many people remember the Black Panther Party as being an extremist group, they were more focused on building and creating change on their own. One way they did this, was through healthcare. By 1965 the Black Panthers had set up 13 health care clinics across the country. (Basset, 741) The health care clinics started in Oakland, and had spread all the way out to Boston, Massachusetts and Mississippi. In doing this the BPP had established that healthcare is not a privilege, but a god given right to everyone who was living on the earth. (Bassett, 743) The BPP also knew that they needed doctors in order for these clinics to stay up and running. They would bring in doctors who had medical degrees to work at these clinics and help people out. They wanted people to feel like they were at a clinic that was better than what most privileged people had. (Brown 756)
            The first clinic was opened in Lawndale, Chicago thanks in part to Ronald Satchel and Fred Hampton. Ronald Satchel was the minister of health for the Illinois chapter of the Black Panthers, while Fred Hampton was one of the leaders of that chapter. Both men were able to attract good doctors to the clinic, one of those being Quentin Young. Young had decided to join the clinic because of how one-sided healthcare was during his time at the University of Chicago. Young said that the white people would receive health care right at the school while colored people were sent away in search of whatever run down clinic would take them in. Young also states that the clinics were served as a tactical and survival advantage. Many members of the BPP would use the clinics that were set up throughout the nation as a way to stay out of police line of sight and to lay low. Young’s partnership with the clinics was the beginning to a positive long term partnership with professional alumni. (Brown 757)
            As the clinics had gained exposure and begun to help everyone out, authorities decided that they needed to step in. They would step in and try to hand down different health violations many times being fabricated all in an attempt to shut down a clinic. The many attempts never worked as many of those old clinics still remain open today. They help anywhere from twenty to thirty people a day and an advocate of the Black Panther Party stays at the centers to conduct in person interviews with almost every patient. (Quentin Young, 754-755)
            On December 4th 1969, Chicago police would raid Fred Hampton’s apartment and kill him in his bed. Ronald Satchel was also in that apartment and would be shot multiple times, but would not be killed from it.  Police claimed that the men had opened fire on them while a search for weaponry was ongoing in the apartment. Evidence would show that something different happened and that the Chicago police had put together an assassination plot to take out the two Black Panthers leaders along with another leader, Mark Clark. (Assassination of Fred Clark, 2014)
            Along with providing free healthcare, the BPP started to provide a breakfast program for children. People who lived in the community would get together in the morning and make breakfast for all of the children who were not fortunate enough to have a well-balanced breakfast before school. It was a program that helped provide for families that were unable to provide the necessities on a day to day basis for their children. (Nelson, Black Panthers Vanguard of the Revolution)
             As The Black Panther Party did their best to help out with the children and medical programs, they were quickly gaining fame for what people call their more radical and extremist measures. The Black Panthers wanted to create change, and they needed people to do it. All they required for people to change was have the want to create that change by any means necessary. Members would often open carry firearms with them wherever they went as a way to intimidate. Any time they hear about injustice from the police happening they would pull up in their cars, often times across the street from where it was happening, get out with their guns in plain sight and stand there and watch as a way to intimidate the police and bring an end to it. The state of California would change the open carry laws shortly after in hopes of easing the unrest in the streets. As a matter of fact, the open carry laws we have in the US today are because of the way the Black Panthers would open carry. (Nelson, Black Panthers Vanguard of the Revolution)
Open carry of fire arms was one reason why the BPP had the image of being a radical group, but they also gained that image from the people who were part of the group. One man named Eldridge Cleaver, would become a sort of spokesperson for the BPP when Huey Newton would be arrested for the fatal shooting of an Oakland police officer in October of 1968. A literary writer, Eldridge held a press conference and said this, “The Black Panther Party demands that Huey P. Newton be set free, and we wish to make it very clear that if he is not set free, there is little hope of avoiding open, armed war on the streets of California and sweeping across this nation.” This would create a huge protest movement where people would march and chant “Free Huey!” This case would deliver two trials both of which led to a mistrial. Huey P Newton would be freed and charges of be dropped in December of 1970. (Nelson, Black Panthers Vanguard of the Revolution)
The BPP had started to become a group that was not only for change, but about pop culture. People were emulating their style and the more they would see of them the more they wanted to be like them. J. Edgar Hoover, president at the time, wanted to put a stop to the group as quickly as possible and developed a Counter Intelligence Program that would force dissension among the ranks. Members of the BPP began to be blackmailed and had letters sent to their parents and spouses with blatant lies, all as a way to shame them publicly and have people turn their backs on them. Many African Americans would be arrested for something minor and then be told that the only way they could be freed is if they were to join the BPP and become an FBI informant. William O’ Neal was one of them and he says that, The police had a case against me…FBI agent Roy Mitchell asked me to, go down to the local Black Panther office and try to gain membership.” Hoover and the FBI had kept this program as secret as possible. (Nelson, Black Panthers Vanguard of the Revolution)
After a few years of fighting and things becoming tougher, Eldridge Cleaver would move to Algeria and denounce the BPP. “I don’t agree with saying that the Black Panther Party supports breakfast for children and that’s all that we’re about…The black Panther Party is for overthrowing the United States government.” Eldridge would only push the image of the BPP being a radical group built on violence and war even more, and that was something that most of the communities did not agree with. Eldridge and Newton would have a falling out and bring a split within the panthers forcing people in the BPP to have to choose a side. Some did while others ended up walking away. (Nelson, Black Panthers Vanguard of the Revolution)
Years would pass and the BPP would begin to lose its effect on the communities where they were at. Bobby Seale would try to become the governor of Oakland California while Huey P. Newton murdered in Oakland California in the year 1989. The man caught for the murder was a drug dealer who would not sell drugs to Newton. After they argued for a few minutes Newton would try to steal the drugs which would lead to his fatal shooting.
While the BPP’s history is laid out for us their message is something that continues to stick around. People always compare Martin Luther King and the Black Panthers together. One man led a peaceful protest to help gain equality for all man, while the Black Panther Party was known for more of their radical and extremist measures. The Black Panthers had their ten-point program of what they wanted laid out, the main theme of that list was ending oppression. Every bullet point on that list was something to accomplish to help fight the oppression.
People and writers all have their own views about what the Black Panther Party was and if they had gone about doing their work the right or wrong way. David Oppenheimer had a new way of looking at the Black Panther Party and writes, “The members are nothing more than a race of people who were proud of their identity.” (Oppenheimer, University of California Press)
While the Black Panthers were definitely proud of who they were and wanted to show their pride, they wanted to create and bring awareness to social justice. At the time they were the gatekeepers, so to speak, of the black community. They helped out children, brought in medical care and also fought oppression by any means necessary no matter how it made them look. If they were a group that were only proud of their identity, then you could argue that they would not have gone through as much trouble to do certain protests and set up the different chapters of the Black Panthers that were spread across the country at that time. Also, something of importance to note, is that when the writer says the members of the Black Panthers were only proud of their race, he fails to realize that anybody who felt oppressed or wanted to end the oppression could join in on the marches and be welcomed as a member. Quentin Young was a white doctor who helped pave the way for the Black Panther medical programs, so to say that the party was created as a matter of race is something that can easily be argued as false and is a way that the writer is discrediting the impact that they left on society today.
Over time certain members of the Black Panther party started to form their own opinions of what the party should be. One guy in particular, whose name keeps popping up, is Eldridge Cleaver. Earlier in the paper I quoted him saying that the Black Panther party was created to overthrow the government and to an extent he is right. Bobby Seale and Huey Newton were highly influenced by the work of Malcom X. Malcom X believed in necessary violence as a way to create the social justice. (The Black Panther Party, Socialist Alternative) He created a ‘Ballot or Bullet’ campaign in where he threatened the US government with violence if African American’s were given the same equal voting privileges. The ‘Ballot or Bullet’ slogan would be something the Black Panthers would adopt later on as well. (Malcom X – Ballot or Bullet, YouTube) As you can see, Malcom X easily advocated the use of weaponry to obtain the social change, something that the Black Panther Party also advocated for to help create the change on the street and help bring an end to oppression.
While, Malcom X had inspired the Seale and Newton to create the Black Panthers, those two men had inspired others to create protests of their own. Two men in particular, Tommie Smith and John Carlos would use the 1968 Olympics to do that. During the medal ceremony for the 200-meter race the two men would create an image and a silent protest that still leaves an impact felt to this day.
John Carlos and Tommie Smith would stand upon the podiums after receiving their medals and raise their right fist into the air. The raised fist signified, according to Carlos and Smith was a sign of self-defense for what was happening in the country. Martin Luther King Jr. had recently been assassinated and Smith and Carlos decided that a new message needed to be sent out. They used the Olympic games as their moment to do just that and in turn created that everlasting Image. (1968 Black Power Salute, YouTube)

The third man in the photo is Peter Norman, he raced or Australia and ended up placing 2nd. He wore a tag on his left breast which read, Olympic Project for Human Rights. Norman was also on board for the protest because Australia had begun a “White Australia” movement just a short time before the Olympics. Before the race started Norman would give the idea to Carlos to wear the black glove over their wrist. Carlos and Smith were disgraced and sent home immediately while Norman would be held out of future Olympic games and never be allowed to run for the Australian team again. (James Montague, CNN) The raised power fist would become a symbol of human rights and one that the Black Panthers would begin to use the raised fist as their sign after the new open carry law had passed.
“We were just human beings who needed to bring attention to the inequality in our country.” A quote by Smith about why they did what they did at the medal ceremony. The affects and the image is still felt to this day with former president Barack Obama even giving high praise of what the men did. “We’re proud of them. Their powerful silent protest in the 1968 Olympic games was controversial, but it woke folks up.” (Dave Boyer, Obama Praises Ex-Olympians)
The impact of John Carlos and Tommie Smith is still felt in the sports world today as well thanks in part to Colin Kaepernick and what he has done this past season in the NFL. Kaepernick started using his star platform to begin his own silent protests. In the beginning of the season Kaepernick sat to protest the National Anthem. Tommie Smith had this to say, “He’s taken a stand. I support the idea of what he’s doing.” While John Carlos chimed in with this, “He’s pushing for the same thing we pushed for 48 years ago, which more dialogue and discussion. (Rich Schapiro, Colin Kaepernick praised…) On Sunday November 13th after scoring a rushing touchdown Kaepernick immediately threw up the black power fist. The impact that Carlos and Smith left on sports and the world is huge. The black power fist is something that players other than Kaepernick still use today. Smith and Carlos showed people how to use their platform to create an image that is still being used and will forever be used as long as we continue to have a need for change.
In today’s world, talking and learning of the Black Panthers is becoming a crucial piece of information. Just this past year at the latest Super Bowl, Beyonce took the stage during the most watched halftime show of the year and helped create a discussion about the black panthers again.  Her Super Bowl performance features dancer dressed up in an all-black outfit with afros just like you would have seen in the old days of the panthers. The performance certainly made people mad and got discussions started. Milwaukee County Sherriff David A. Clarke Jr even had this to say about it, “Coming out in those Black Panther type uniforms, would that be acceptable if a white band came out in hoods and white sheets in the same fashion?” To begin, David Clarke is referencing the Ku Klux Klan, an organization that had one goal and that was to re-establish white supremacy throughout the country. The KKK wanted to get this message out through violence and whatever they thought was necessary. (History, Ku Klux Klan) While violence could be something that you could say the KKK and BPP had in common, their overall message was completely different. The BPP as mentioned throughout were all about wanting to create social justice and end oppression not only for African Americans but for all people living any way possible. To mention these two groups in the same breath would be a discredit for everything that the Black Panthers had fought for in the 60’s. Instead of wondering about what would happen if a group wore white cloaks and sang on a stage we should step back and look at which group inspired more change and inspired people to act out in honor of what was right instead of what was wrong.
While Beyonce drew a ton of backlash for her performance Colin Kaepernick had taken the time to create a Black Panthers inspired youth camp in Oakland California. He also hopes to expand the camp to bring the program to other cities across the country. Kaepernick had this to say to people who attended the camp. “We’re here today to fight back and give you all lessons to fight back…to combat the oppressive issues that our people face on a daily basis.” (Huffington Post, Colin Kaepernick just started a Black Panther Inspired Youth Camp)
            The effects of the Black Panthers are still being felt today, whether it is Colin Kaepernick or Beyonce stepping out and protesting we still see that they are a group that has made a lasting impact on our country. From sports to music, the Black Panthers changed not only the way people lived, but the way people protest. They were able to intimidate through violence thanks to what Bobby Seale and Huey Newton learned from Malcom X and when they needed to they needed to they were able to protest without the need for violence. The message of wanting to end oppression is what is still fought for today by people all over like it was in the 60’s and every generation afterwards. Eldridge Cleaver and Huey Newton had not gotten into a war of words and could have racked brought their heads together, there is no telling what they could have done. The fact that people still talk about them and protest in honor of them fifty years later shows exactly the type of impact they had and continue to have to this day.

Bibliography  
1.     “1968 Olympics The Black Power Salute.” YouTube, YouTube, 2012, www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnvCiKUlLAw.

2.     “The Black Panther Party.” Socialist Alternative, www.socialistalternative.org/life-legacy-malcolm-x/black-panther-party/.

3.     “Malcolm X - Ballot or Bullet.” YouTube, YouTube, 2006,
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4.     "The Black Panther Ten-Point Program." The North American Review 253.4 (1968): 16-17. Web.
5.     "Quentin Young on the Black Panther Party Free Clinic in Chicago." American Journal of Public Health 106.10 (2016): 754-755. Web.
6.     Brown, Theodore M. "Working With the Panthers to Transform Health Care for Poor Black Communities." American Journal of Public Health 106.10 (2016): 756-757. Web.
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8.     David Oppenheimer, 2016, University of California Press
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11.  Boyer, Dave. “Obama Praises Ex-Olympians Tommie Smith, John Carlos for ‘68 ‘Black Power’ Salute.” The Washington Times, The Washington Times, www.washingtontimes.com/news/2016/sep/29/obama-praises-ex-olympians-smith-carlos-68-black-p/.
12.  Schapiro, Rich. “Colin Kaepernick Praised by 'Black Power' Olympians Smith, Carlos.” NY Daily News, 2016, www.nydailynews.com/sports/football/colin-kaepernick-praised-black-power-olympians-smith-carlos-article-1.2771795.
13.  History.com Staff. “Ku Klux Klan.” History.com, A&E Television Networks, 2009, www.history.com/topics/ku-klux-klan. 

Monday, November 28, 2016

My audience is the large group of people that seem to get mad whenever a professional athlete decides to silently protest. I will be trying to persuade them that everything is okay and their silent protests wont take away from how spectacular a player is or what happens on the football field or basketball court, or whatever sport they like to watch. I'd like them to think that these protests could be much worse and if players really did want to protest they could easily sit out games affecting the game they watch.

1. I think this audience is the older crowd, white 40+ hardcore christian, southern states, level of education would have to be like high school completion and republicans. This audience could be really diverse as I've seen many other people besides from what I've written down to argue and get mad about the protests.

2. The main audience seems to be real southern, or at least have southern roots. Loves to hunt, talks about their love for America at all times, has a huge family goes hunting on the weekends. Has beards, goes shooting and drinking. Backwoods type of people not used to seeing these protests in their sports and entertainment

3. The one thing that we probably share is that I do not really care to see the protest's either. Other than raise awareness and get likes and retweets I don't see the point of kneeling for the anthem, or wearing t-shirts that express your thoughts on the court, football or baseball field.

4. What we do not share is that i think the players can and should certainly keep doing this, only because it helps bring extra awareness to the issues and shows that there are things bigger than sports and TV going on all around us. I love those things myself, but it is really easy to get lost in them

5. From what I can tell, this seems like a pretty easy paper to write out and talk to that group of people about. The main kind of argument ill be making is that life goes on, the awareness gets raised, it doesn't help to get mad. Movies still get made, sports still get played.

6. Our love of sports and entertainment!

7. On their unwillingness to accept that people can protest and form their own opinions and life will move on

8. As badly as i want to put throughout, thats too vague, so i guess i will acknowledge all of that towards the end as i give a closing thought before the actual conclusion to the paper.


Problem Frame - An Open Letter to People Protesting Protesters

An open letter to people who protest others protesting

Today in America people are mad. Mad about people using their right to protest. These people are angry that stars have used their platforms to spread awareness about a issue and make those said issues a priority. NFL, NBA and also just any person with any fame are using their stardom for other things besides their sport. They are speaking out and peacefully protesting and people are mad about their peaceful protests interjecting into their entertainment. I think that this is a fantastic thing for people with stardom to do. While sports is a huge thing, there are many things that are bigger than putting a ball through a hoop, or a pass being caught. These players and entertainers spreading awareness helps inform and educate others. I think it's good for them to do this, because there are much worse things they can do besides silently protest.

Friday, November 11, 2016

Rhetorical Analysis of an object, Clenched fist at the 1968 Olympics

Analysis of a Movement
            The Black Panther Party had a huge effect throughout the civil rights movement in the 60’s. They had different ideals than what MLK had, but they also wanted to end the oppression by any means necessary. Whether it was them open carrying, or arriving at the scene of an arrest with their guns sweeping out and across. The Black Panthers had their own plan and idea to end the opressions and they were not going to change that. One other things that helped the idea of unity with in the black community is the clenched fist.
            MLK had the “I Have A Dream” speech to show his protest. The Black Panthers open carried and would fight violence with violence when necessary. The other protest that works into the Black Panthers and would be something that the group would use would be the clenched fist which was created during the 1968 Olympic Games. (Youtube, 1986 Black Power Salute)
            During a medal ceremony for the 200-meter race Tommie Smith and John Carlos had a planned silent protest, that was inspired by what Martin Luther King Jr had been doing with his civil right march. As they raised their hands, which had a black glove over it, one of the most iconic images of the civil rights movement was made. Upon doing this Carlos and Smith were disgraced and sent home immediately. When they returned home they received a hero’s welcome. Of course there was third guy in the picture he was 2nd place finisher, Peter Norman of Australia. (Youtube, 1986 Black Power Salute)
            Peter Norman wore a tag on his left breast which read, Olympic Project for Human Rights. Peter Norman decided he would help partake in the protest as Australia had a “White Australia” creating protests. Norman, would also do more than wear the patch, as he also suggested to Carlos and Smith that they wear the black glove on opposite fists. Norman would be held out of future Olympic games and also never be allowed to run for the Australian team. That is the history of the clenched fist that we have all seen. (Youtube, 1986 Black Power Salute)
            How does this all relate to the Black Panthers? Smith and Carlos said they did this as a sign of self defense for what was happening in the country. Martin Luther King Jr had recently been assassinated, so there had to be a new way to send a message, and what better way than with the whole world watching. The image of the clenched fist has lived on through history. Its one of the first images that people think of when they hear not just silent protests, but protests in general. No one could have ever thought that the simple raising of fist would leave the sort of impact is has on not only this country but the world.
            Once the fist was raised into the air, it was immediately adopted by all of the protesting groups for civil rights around the world. The Black Panther group would come to use as a sign to help their protest, often times appearing and standing with their fist raised into the air. The message was clear, and the new image of protest had been created. A silent and powerful image that would last and continue to be a beacon of change for forever.
            The Black Panthers were not the only group to use this as their protest. People today like Colin Kaepernick have used this image to speak for a protest. Many NFL stars have stood with their right fist thrown into the air as a way to protest the shooting by police officers and the oppression that is happening in today’s society.  
            Pop stars such as Beyonce have even adopted the image to protest the same thing. During her most recent performance of the Super Bowl Halftime show, she and her dancers were dressed in all black and repeatedly threw their fist into the air the same way that Smith and Carlos did during the 1968 Olympic games.
            The raised fist has stayed around as a protest because of the somplicity and message it elicits. Raising your fist, does not show say that you are for violence, it tells everyone that you are for human rights and for peace. Unlike the Black Panthers who wanted to evoke violence when necessary, this fist sent out a message that some would argue is louder than the bang of bullet. Smith and Carlos are forever immortalized because of it, but upon their return they were treated as low class garbage by anybody wo didn’t want to end oppression.
When Peter Norman died in 2006, Smith and Carlos carried his casket to the grave. Norman is the forgotten man whenever this subject is brought up and he paid for it not being allowed to race in the Olympics ever again. On that fateful day in October three men changed the history of not only a silent protest, but a protest itself. They showed that you don’t need guns, you don’t need violence, all you need is an audience and a simple action.
Recently former President elect Barack Obama even gave praise to what John Carlos and Tommie Smith did all that time ago in 1968. Obama said the he was proud of what they did. The silent protest was controversial and woke many people up to what was happening around the world and in the US. Smith has since gone on record of saying that the silent protest was not a protest for black people. It was a salute for human rights. (Boyer, Washington Times)
With all that said, we can see that the raised fist means so much more than just a protest, it became a overnight symbol, even though Smith and Carlos were sent off and banned from the Olympics they did something more than winning a medal will ever do. That image of them with their fist in the air and their heads bowed is an image that has never lost its impact.
This Olympics was not the only one to create a controvercy as the 1936 Olympics in Berlin had many German people doing a Nazi salute, something that people would make a comparison to what Carlos and Smith. The German people faced no repercussion because the thought was that the Nazi salute was used to represent the country at the time. The effect seems to almost be on the same thing as both signs were made for a representation of a group of people. The only difference in the case of the 1968 Olympics is that a whole country didn’t do it along with the men that were on the podium that night.
No matter what you think, the fact is that what Tommie Smith and John Carlos did something that will live on for the history of time. It set a new presedent for that a silent protest could be and do. It reached not only to this country but other parts of the world as Peter Norman took part in helping the protest and felt the reprocussions. People are protesting the results of the election as I type. Some are causing damage and looting the streets where they live. That doesn’t make America a better place, because the damage makes things worse never better. The silent protests done on that day is something that all protestors everywhere can learn from and see that as long as you have the right idea your message will get out and live on through history. Leave the destruction to the misinformed.
Citations
1.     Boyer, Dave. “Obama Praises Ex-Olympians Tommie Smith, John Carlos for ‘68 ‘Black Power’ Salute.” Washington Times, The Washington Times, www.washingtontimes.com/news/2016/sep/29/obama-praises-ex-olympians-smith-carlos-68-black-p/. 

2.     “1968 Olympics The Black Power Salute.” YouTube, YouTube, 2012, www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnvcikullaw. 


          
1. How do you think that I could make this relate more clearly, or even just relate better at all to the Black Panther Party?

2. Is there any more that i could write about to make this part of the paper pop?

3. What is one thing that you would like to see improved throughout the paper?