Friday, December 9, 2016

Persuasive Paper - Open Letter

Colin Potter
Dr. Stephanie Brown
Persuasive Essay Final
Open Letter of Millennials Concerned About Trump and this Past Election

Dear Millennials,
            2016 has been one of the worst years on record. With the death of so many influential people, and the rise of Donald Trump, it is hard to be optimistic moving forwards. Barring a cataclysmic meteorite striking the Earth square in the middle of the US, Donald Trump will be the next president of the United States, having won 306 electoral votes (CNN). This is especially disheartening when you look at the popular vote, results, which as of this writing were 62,793,872 (46.3%) for Donald Trump and 65,432,202 (48.2%) for Hillary Clinton. All this makes it seem like we are all helpless to make progress and positive change in our country, however there are many ways in which one person can make a huge difference within their community, in the nation, and even globally. More importantly, the price of complacency in this key point in our history may be a reduction of the rights of our fellow Americans, a huge global conflict, and irreversible damage to our environment. All of us should get involved by donating money to organizations that support our views, calling our representatives to voice our concerns and values, speaking out against oppression, and voting.
            I can say with relative certainty that we all wish to make a positive impact in the country. The problem is that, with the results of this election, it might be hard to know what to do. The biggest opposition many millennials usually have to becoming politically active is, “What can one person do to make a difference? Someone else will be able to dedicate more time that I will so it doesn’t matter if I get involved.” This is not only wrong, but it assumes that someone else out there has your exact same values but is willing to dedicate twice as much time and effort to make up for your noninvolvement. Even if it is simply a monthly $5 donation to an organization working to progress your values, it still goes a long way. Bernie Sanders was able to push the most progressive platform the Democratic Party has ever had raising money with just around $30 as an average donation (Bump). He may not have won, but many of his most popular points are now part of the Democratic platform, making this a clear example of the impact even a little involvement can have. Even getting out one evening and participating in a protest is a way to make your voice heard and push for change.
            [1]Change can be made at many different levels in our society, so deciding which level to put your time and money in is very important. You will see the most change from your effort and money at the community level. Calling city council members, donating money to local organizations like the local Planned Parenthood or local food bank, and even getting involved in your neighborhood are great way to push for change in a way that will be visible to you and not depend directly on who may be President. At the State level, your time and money work to elect your state representatives and push for changes that affect the whole state. These changes have the potential to affect anything from how much money your local schools receive, to when your city and county can decide to hold an election for local politicians. Pushing for these changes is a great way to influence your state representatives and push for state policy which in many cases may become adopted by politicians at the national level, impacting the whole country. At the national level, your time and money generally have the least impact. However, there are things that can be done to push for change. Calling the local offices of your congressmen and women is a great way to push for your values at the national level through your representatives in Congress. Donating money to national organizations is also a great way to allow these organizations to do a better job at their goals, and it means that your interests are more strongly represented. Just look at how much influence the NRA has, and imagine if instead of a group like that it were an environmental organization who had that much power because of donations of individuals.
            [2]A huge issue that has come up recently has been how people should protest. Millennials get out on the street to protest Trump’s election and get yelled at to get jobs, to get over it you college brats, and that it won’t make a difference. These arguments are all wrong to some degree or another. It is definitely not true that protesters don’t have jobs. The truth is that millennials can’t afford things because of rising costs of living and especially of education, and a part time or full time job is not enough to pay college tuition, and being a student in debt does not devalue the voice you have. What you choose to do with your free time is different for everyone, and people who choose to spend it making their voice heard are completely justified in doing so. The argument that millennials are spoiled and should get over it is an argument designed to devalue the voices of the millions of people out there protesting and make them have less of an impact. People who are dissatisfied are often viewed in this way, and are devalued just like this by others whose views are different. Finally, the notion that a millennials won’t make a difference by protesting is completely wrong. The goal isn’t to change the result of the election overall, it is to raise awareness of the fact that Clinton won the popular vote by almost 2%, a sizable margin, and Trump and republicans need to realize this and work to reconcile the concerns of the majority moving forwards. Because of this goal, protests on Trump’s presidency are effective because they succeed in raising awareness of this fact.
            [3]Moving forwards in this divided chapter in our nation’s history, I encourage you to get involved, to donate money to local and national organizations that protect and advance your interests, call local and national politicians to make sure they know about your concerns, and get out and protest. The alt-right has done a fantastic job at being politically active, and have been very successful at pushing their values and policies into office and law. It’s about time that the left did the same, and it can only happen if many people mobilize and get involved. The only way to do it wrong is to not get involved at all. There is so much at stake, from our environment, to our rights, and even our international relations, all of which should alone be enough reason to get involved but together make it imperative we do. So let’s get to work.

Works Cited
CNN Politics. 2016 Election Results. CNN Politics, 2016, www.cnn.com/election/results. Accessed 8 Dec 2016.
Bump, Philip. Bernie Sanders keeps saying his average donation is $27, but his own numbers contradict that. Washington Post, 2016, www.washingtonpost.com/news/the-fix/wp/2016/04/18/bernie-sanders-keeps-saying-his-average-donation-is-27-but-it-really-isnt/?utm_term=.b3a488b24244. Accessed 8 Dec 2016.



[1] Paragraph Structure Paragraph 1:
-          Purpose: to look at the differences in what effect they can have on their community, state, and the nation are.
-          Main Characters: the reader, their time and money
-          Topic String Type: A mixed topic string format, with focused at the beginning and more chained strings later on. There are several breaks in the string organization as I switch between the community, state, and national level.
[2] Paragraph Structure Paragraph 2:
-          Purpose: Defend the protests occurring against Trump and convince the reader to be a part of other protests.
-          Main characters: Millennials, these arguments, the reader, people in general
-          Topic String Type: Mixed format, alternating between focused and chained, but following a branching chain style where one
[3] Conclusion Justification:
                The biggest thing I was trying to accomplish in the conclusion was to reiterate the ways I discussed of how to get involved and to impart a sense of urgency and necessity in the reader for getting involved. I chose to make it fairly short to add to its impact, and end the paragraph itself with a short sentence to leave the reader with something impactful that underscores the need to get involved in the political process.

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