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Friday, December 9, 2016

Persuasive Paper - Fracking

Colin McCormick
ENGL 306
Doctor Brown
12/9/16
Persuasive Essay
Dear Fracking Companies,
I am sure that all of the companies involved in the process of fracking are well aware of how the fracking process uses a high pressure mixture of chemicals and water to release oils and gasses trapped deep underground. Although this method may be affective in extracting natural resources, providing large quantities of energy and providing jobs, it also has many drawbacks, some of which are: water contamination, water depletion, air pollution and earthquakes. For example, for water contamination alone there has been “over 1,000 documented cases of water contamination” in locations that are close to fracking sites, along with many cases involving “sensory, respiratory and neurological damage” (Loki, Reynard). These negative aspects to fracking, will only serve to speed up the depletion of natural resources, as well as have a huge detrimental effect on the environment if left unchecked. Therefore by allowing the use of fracking as an extraction process, it is in turn supporting the destruction and contamination of the Earth.
Paragraph Structure
1.      The purpose of the following paragraph is to inform the audience on the topic of water contamination as it pertains to fracking and why contaminated water is such a big problem.
2.      The main characters are: Water Contamination, water
3.      Focused Topic String
            Water contamination is one of the biggest problems concerning fracking, obviously water is one of our most precious resources and because of this, there is no margin for error when dealing with the quality and quantity of the water we as humans can use. Therefore it is concerning when it takes “40,000 gallons of 600 different kinds chemicals” (Gibson, Carl) to run each fracking well, and even more concerning when one looks at the “360 BILLION gallons” (Gibson, Carl)  of chemicals it takes to run all the fracking wells in the United States. Of the 600 chemicals mixed with the water (some of which are: formaldehyde, mercury, uranium, and hydrochloric acid) about 30 to 50 percent of them are “reclaimed”, whereas the rest of the chemicals are left underground. This amount of toxicity left in the ground near water sources is what leads to water contamination (i.e. water contaminated with mercury, uranium etc.) and is one of the main reasons why opposition against fracking is so high. “Pennsylvania, a major fracking state, has just admitted that fracking has contaminated local water supplies 243 times in 22 counties” (Gibson, Carl). From this excerpt it is clear that water contamination is a huge issue for fracking companies, the fact that the water has been contaminated that many times in one state should be a red flag that there is an issue with the process that is being used.
Paragraph Structure
1.      The purpose of the following paragraph is to present facts based on the amount of water being used in the fracking industry. This paragraph also serves to play on the recipients pathos, in hopes that the recipient will feel guilty about the over usage of water.
2.      The main characters are: water, water quantity, fracking, drought
3.      Chained Topic String
            Not only is the quality of water a problem when fracking wells are involved, but also the quantity of water being used for said wells. In the United States each fracking site takes up to eight million gallons of water to finish, when all 500,000 of the U.S’s fracking wells are counted for, at 18 fracks per site, it comes out to a massive 72 trillion gallons of water in order for the fracking sites to remain operational (Gibson, Carl). This large amount of water needed to remain up and running takes away water from industries that need it just as badly, such as livestock and agriculture. For example, in Texas there is a major drought occurring, which in turn causes livestock and crops to die and food prices to go up due to scarcity of water. In towns within Texas, specifically next to Eagle Ford Shale they are seeing 45 to 50 percent of the water being used coming from fracking sites (Gibson, Carl). This high water usage is highly irresponsible, seeing as “more than 90 percent of the water used in fracking well never returns to the surface” (Loki, Reynard). Due to this, the water is unable to rejoin the water cycle because it is trapped so far beneath the earth, which is bad for any states experiencing a drought that are relying on rainfall to replenish their stores.
            Besides just having an effect on the quality and quantity of water, fracking also contributes to causing earthquakes. Oklahoma for example has hundreds of fracking sites, and now they are more likely to have an earthquake than California. From 1990 to 2008 there were only three earthquakes that year that measured a 3.0 or more on the Richter scale in Oklahoma. In 2013 that number rose to 109 earthquakes, and in 2014 it rose even more to 238 earthquakes (Gibson, Carl). This correlation between the number of earthquakes and the amount of fracking shows very well that this type of resource can have detrimental effects on the environments in which it occurs. The earthquakes that have and do occur from this process have the possibility to be very destructive, in Oklahoma City there were fourteen homes that were destroyed from earthquakes caused by drilling. “EPA seismologists acknowledge a very clear correlation between fracking and earthquakes, saying the quakes would stop as soon as wells were turned off” (Gibson, Carl).
            The process of fracking like many things can be seen in two lights, on one hand yes, fracking does provide access to an abundant amount of natural resources, as well as providing jobs for many people. On the other hand it can also contaminate water, overuse water, promote earthquakes, and be a very destructive force. All of these problems then link themselves to other issues and just like dominoes, everything falls. As the Earth’s environment falls farther into decline, we as humans must ask ourselves if the ends justify the means in the fight for natural resources.
Purpose for Conclusion
The purpose of my conclusion was to evoke pathos in the reader, by attempting to show them that this is just as much their problem as it is mine. I chose to write the conclusion in this way because I wanted to leave the reader almost feeling ‘bad’ that this is occurring.

Works Cited
News, Carl Gibson Reader Supported. "9 Good Reasons to Ban Fracking Immediately." Reader
Supported News. N.p., 12 Oct. 2014. Web. 09 Dec. 2016.
Lallanilla, Marc. "Facts About Fracking." LiveScience. Purch, 23 Jan. 2015. Web. 09 Dec. 2016.
Loki, Reynard. "8 Dangerous Side Effects of Fracking That the Industry Doesn't Want You to
Hear About." Alternet. Independent Media Institute, 28 Apr. 2015. Web. 09 Dec. 2016

Sunday, December 4, 2016

Final Draft Research Paper

Colin McCormick
ENGL 306
Dr. Brown
December 4, 2016
Final Draft
            Throughout history peace has played a backseat to violence as a problem solving technique used by human societies when fighting for a cause. Although this method of conflict resolution may work, the violence it incites brings into question whether or not other forms of conflict resolution may be more effective and less harmful. Within this paper I look at the effectiveness that Mohandas Gandhi had in using peaceful protest as a conflict resolution rather than violence in the context of overbearing British Colonial rule.
            During British Imperial rule of India Gandhi was a major influential figure and advocate for the liberation of India from Great Britain. During this time Great Britain had an “oppressive” rule over India and enforced heavy tariffs and taxes on the citizens, as well as treating them as second class citizens unless they were wealthy or nobility. It is due to this type of British rule that Gandhi became so passionate about liberating India and without this context it may have never occurred.
            The context in which Gandhi performed his acts of rhetoric was also key in the success of his peaceful movement. Due to their position in the conflict India was able to utilize the strength of their peaceful protest by using the advantage of being seen as peaceful victims being punished by a ‘tyrannical’ British empire. Without this position Gandhi’s movement may not have succeeded due to his methods relying on the sympathy and compassion of the people looking towards the actions of India and Great Britain as well as the feeling that Great Britain did not want to look like merciless, greedy tyrants. If however British plans were changed and they had instead decided to wipe out the Indian population, Gandhi’s form of rhetoric would not have been as effective except to serve as a martyr due to the face that a ‘lay down and take it’ approach does not really work if the objective of your opponent is to kill you. Which is why under this context peaceful protest succeeded, the British wanted to rule over the Indian population therefore any acts of violence against the peaceful Indian protestors from the British seemed ruthless on their part.
            During the remainder of my paper I will discuss and go into more detail about the aspects of both the rhetorical and historical context of my topics as well as provide an analysis of an artifact from this protest movement.
To fully understand the intricacies of India’s independence from British rule one must look at the history of the two nations and their relationship. For over two centuries prior to India’s independence in 1947, they were under imperialistic control of the British Empire starting in 1750 after the success of the East India Trading Company:
The British conquered Bengal in the second half of the eighteenth century. The East India Company thereby was transformed from an enterprise primarily serving and protecting the commercial interests of its presidencies along coastal India and other posts in Asia to a territorial governor exercising the powers of state in association with its mercantile responsibilities. This discrete and abrupt change in the fortunes of the Company marked the start of two hundred years of British imperial rule in India. It also was the occasion for the reorganization and reform of the institutions through which the British gradually strengthened the interests of the home authorities in the administration of Indian affairs. (de Schweinitz 86)
This success along with the division of power amongst Indian princess at the time created the perfect situation for the British Empire to take control. Another problem during this time was the British Empires massive scope of territories to which they had political and economic influence. During the 19th century other Eastern Asian countries such as Thailand and China shared in the British Empires disdain and oppression/opposition of Indian citizens. “The Thai encapsulated their attitude toward South Asians in a popular saying, still much quoted: ‘On your way, if you come across a snake and an Indian, kill the Indian first’” (Kratoska 172). During such an oppressing setting as this the Indian Independence Movement, and more specifically Mahatma Gandhis’ peaceful outlooks on rhetoric in social movements took quite some time to develop, however it could be argued that this oppression also fueled and inspired Gandhi’s teachings.
            Mohandas Gandhi born October 2, 1869 would later become a national figure and leader for the Indian Independence movement. During his early years Gandhi studied law England and later practiced this law in South Africa, where he faced prejudice and racism. The culmination of these events led him back to India in 1915 where “the reins of the nationalist movement of which he had only been a distant spectator were to fall into his hands, and were to remain with him until his death” (Nanda 141). Gandhi made his ideals very clear from the beginning, to gain full independence from the British Empire through peaceful and non-violent acts of protest and rhetoric. As stated by B.R. Nanda “He was heading a mass struggle, the avowed purpose of which was to end alien rule. It was an open rebellion, even though a ‘non-violent’ one” (Nanda 186). During his movement he made it clear that he was protesting the treatment of British ruled Indians, however he himself did not hold resentment against the British for driving Indian society and culture down. Instead he believed that it was the fault of Western culture carrying on the idea and beliefs of ruling over another people.
Gandhi was not ignorant of the origins and the basis of the British rule in India. In Hind Swaraj he had given a merciless analysis of Indian history. The East India Company’s victories he had attributed to the divisions of the Indian princes. He had criticized Pax Brittanica; the peace was in name only, as it had emasculated the Indian nation and made it cowardly. The railways, the law courts and the educational system had all served to tighten the stranglehold of the occupying power. This was a scathing indictment of British rule, but the moral he drew from it was novel: India was ground down not by the British rule but by Western civilization which had perpetuated that rule. (Nanda 187-188)
            Although Gandhi did not resent the British for the issues and inequalities they had created, he was still able to acknowledge that what was happening to India was not in any way right. These issues included unfair taxes on lower caste Indian citizens, as well voting rights for only the top wealthiest Indian citizens. This inequality created the racial resentment held by the British Empire and this is exactly what Gandhi was fighting against, “As Thomas Munro pointed out, there had been foreign conquerors who had been more violent and more cruel, but none had treated Indians with such secret scorn as the British, by stigmatizing ‘the whole people as unworthy of trust’ (Nanda 141).
            Over the course of this rhetoric movement the protest development occurs over two phases; the inception phase; and the rhetorical crisis phase. Due to the fact that this protest movement occurred over a span of decades, the events that occurred can be categorized into these two categories most effectively. Once Gandhi became involved in the movement in 1915 the phase of inception began as the Mahatma began to share and enact his new found ideals of peaceful civil disobedience and protest. This alone sparked a movement for India’s independence one which strove for peaceful resolutions above all else. As the movement progressed and gained notoriety, Gandhi was able to successfully draw the eye of the world to the injustices occurring within India, for example with the Salt March of 19 (Weber), Gandhi successfully organized a protest march against Britain’s salt taxes, a march in which Gandhi led followers from Ahmedabad to Dandi on the shore to create their own salt. After being harassed by British police officers while protesting peacefully, the British withdrew themselves and called this event a stalemate, shortly after changing the Salt taxes to prices that are more reasonable.
                         At the beginning of the 1900’s a self-aware India began to emerge from the shadow that was British Imperialism. In 1915 Gandhi returned to India after having spent 21 years in the South African colonies under British rule, these 21 year changed Gandhi and “his exposure to the injustices experienced by Indian indentured labour would prove to have a radicalizing effect” (McLaughlan 431). As Robbie McLaughlan goes onto explain, it was during this time after his return that Gandhi began to develop his philosophies of passive resistance,
The philosophy of passive resistance was given the name satyagraha (satya, truth; agraha, insistence) … For Gandhi, satyagraha represents an absolute refusal to legitimise the presence of Europeans in colonial territories (McLaughlan 431-432).
As McLaughlan explains, satyagraha represented everything that the people of India (including Gandhi) wanted to instill and represent, as well as representing the ideals that they would never accept. During this time Indian culture was being suffocated by imperialistic pressure placed on it by the British Empire, their customs, language, way of life were all dying out to be replaced by Western ideologies and practices. It is from this problem that Gandhi’s protest started for the independence of Indian citizens under British Control. As mentioned above Gandhi’s movement felt no need to accept the presence of Europeans in colonial territories, and took on the ideals and beliefs to essentially be as polar opposite as possible to the British and Western Ideals. McLaughlan stipulates that in Gandhi’s mind violence was a “…European tradition that is fundamentally alien to indigenous Indian culture. Violence is inherently European, so to react to violence with yet more violence is an act of legitimizing the logic and presence of the foreign invader” (McLaughlan 432). Under these ideals, individuals under this movement believed that any violence used would be a direct personification of the subjugation they had experienced. Thus the core ideals and identities of the protest are shown; first, that peaceful civil disobedience is to always be used in the face of violent oppressors, and two, that the use of violence to accomplish a goal, stains the credibility by which you have achieved said goal and furthers the process of colonization through the assimilation of the oppressor’s culture.
            Although there have been many historical accounts of violent revolts yielding desired outcomes for the parties enacting them, the identities that Gandhi’s instilled in his teachings attempted to show that a passive, satyagraha approach to handling a violent adversary can yield the same if not better results. The argument that McLaughlin makes in his journal is one to support the idea that as compared to James Connolly’s violent beliefs on how to gain independence for Ireland from an imperialistic British Empire in the early 20th century, Gandhi’s methods of civil-disobedience and non-violence were more effective in disrupting and stopping the Imperial British Empires reign.
In refusing to endorse violence, Gandhi establishes a dynamic of conflict between the colonized and the colonizer that completely disrupts the established order of being. In doing so, passive resistance ruptures the logic of late nineteenth- and early twentieth-century British imperialism in a way that is significantly more traumatic than the militarism adopted by Pearse and Connolly… Žižek contends that… ‘What Gandhi did, although it was very peaceful but in a way extremely violent, was to boycott customs, etc. He targeted the entire structure of the British Colonial State’. The Indian nationalists, shaped in the image of Gandhi, were successful precisely because they targeted the basic functions of the British Colonial State as opposed to engaging the British in an uneven military conflict (McLaughlan 343-434).
            During the fight for independence, Gandhi’s movement clearly voiced their rhetorical goals, which were to fight the injustices that the British Empire was imposing through the use of non-violent civilly disobedient acts, such as refusing the payment of taxes, making their own clothes, and even making their own salt. These acts of civil disobedience were effective in that because the members of this movement were acting non-violently, any violence inflicted upon them while peacefully protesting made the British appear harsh and cruel to the outside world. This concept is the main idea behind satyagraha and is what makes it effective in resisting violent colonizers. The notion that using non-violent protest methods actually works against violent reformation is exactly the end the result that Gandhi’s movement wanted to shed light upon.
            Civil disobedience as an act of protest is the main rhetorical goal of this movement, however this differs slightly from the legislative, social, and political goals of Gandhi’s movement. Although these goals are similar to the rhetorical goal in the sense that all the goals involve independence from British rule, they differ in the idea that rhetorically Gandhi wanted his followers to ideologically stay away and independent from British/Western influence. Whereas the legislative, social, and political goals of Gandhi’s movement were to become completely independent from Britain and become their own self governing body so as to create their own influence. The difference in these goals is ideological, where one is a state of mind and one is a tangible achievement.
            During Gandhi’s independence movement a key factor to the success of his protests was the context in which each was placed. The reason context plays such an important role is because within certain contexts, Gandhi’s non-violent forms of protest would not be affective, for example if the end goal of a violent entity or country is to eradicate another people, it would most likely not be in the best interest of those ‘people’ to just peacefully lay back and allow them to succeed in eradicating them. However, under the circumstances of a violent oppressive imperialistic force, the context is perfect for Gandhi’s methodology due the oppressors want to stay and maintain a presence/ruling over the resources and people within the colonized nation by using force, and fear. The difference between the two contexts in a broader scope is that under one context the oppressing force has no remorse for the actions they inflict upon the oppressed and only care about their end goals, whereas in the other context the oppressing force must take into consideration remorse, as well as outside speculation on the actions they commit as a ‘parent’ nation.
            The methodology that Gandhi used, and the movement that he started was a revolutionary thought at the time and gained publicity worldwide. This in part helped to support Gandhi’s movement by shedding light (globally) on the social inequities and injustices occurring to colonialized Indians. It also brought Gandhi’s followers closer together under the unified cause of satyagraha when placed under the global spotlight. And ultimately Gandhi’s teachings inspired individuals to be proud and to be determined in holding fast to a non-violent form of protest.
            From a movement with such an impact it is clear that in the context that it was placed, Gandhi’s non-violent ideologies and satyagraha were very effective in enacting change for the colonized Indian people. Due to this context Gandhi and his followers identities could be fully voiced in a manner that acted towards a common goal, and thus shows that certain identities can be articulated better under certain situations that suit the ideologies being represented. In this case the identity of peaceful protest was articulated most effectively under the circumstances of an oppressive colonial rule.
            Overall peaceful protest is very effective in performing acts of civil disobedience geared towards change on a social or political level when facing violence. Although it may have its exceptions in usage, peaceful acts of protest can be seen as a very effective at making a point as well as avoiding (usually) all violence and should be utilized whenever appropriate. Many would argue that there are times and places where violence is unavoidable, and I would agree with them, my point is not that non-violent forms of protest are the only suitable ways to protest. It is that given the option, finding a non-violent resolution to a conflict seems much more preferable than any option involving violence or bloodshed.



Works Cited
Chenoweth, Erica. "Civil Resistance: Reflections On An Idea Whose Time Has Come." Global
Governance 20.3 (2014): 351-358. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Fernée, Tadd. "Gandhi And The Heritage Of Enlightenment: Non-Violence, Secularism And 
Conflict Resolution." International Review Of Sociology 24.2 (2014): 309-324. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Ferrari, Michel, et al. "Why Is Gandhi Wise? A Cross-Cultural Comparison Of Gandhi As An 
Exemplar Of Wisdom." Journal Of Adult Development 23.4 (2016): 204-213. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Gupta, R.C. Indian Freedom Movement and Thought: Nehru and the Politics of ‘Right’ versus 
‘Left’ (1930-1947). Sterling Publishers, 1983. 
McLaughlan, Robbie. "Connolly, Gandhi And Anticolonial (Non)Violence." Irish Studies 
Review 24.4 (2016): 430-440. Humanities International Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Nanda, B.R. Mahatma Gandhi. Oxford University Press, 28 Oct. 1989. 
Phibbs, Cheryl. The Montgomery Bus Boycott: A History and Reference
Guide.Greenwood, 2009.
Raina, Vinod. "Political Diversity, Common Purpose: Social Movements In India." Inter-Asia 
Cultural Studies 5.2 (2004): 320-327. Humanities International Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Scalmer, Sean. Gandhi in the West: The Mahatma and the Rise of Radical Protest.Cambridge 
University Press, 2011.
de Schweinitz, Karl, Jr. The Rise and Fall of British India: Imperialism as inequality.Methuen, 
1983.
Weber, thomas. "Grandhiam Nonviolence And The Salt March." Social Alternatives 21.2

(2002): 46-51. Political Science Complete. Web. 7 Nov. 2016

Thursday, November 3, 2016

Historical and Rhetorical Drafts

Colin McCormick
ENGL 306
Dr. Brown
November 3, 2016
Historical Context
            To fully understand the intricacies of India’s independence from British rule one must look at the history of the two nations and their relationship. For over two centuries prior to India’s independence in 1947, they were under imperialistic control of the British Empire starting in 1750 after the success of the East India Trading Company:
The British conquered Bengal in the second half of the eighteenth century. The East India Company thereby was transformed from an enterprise primarily serving and protecting the commercial interests of its presidencies along coastal India and other posts in Asia to a territorial governor exercising the powers of state in association with its mercantile responsibilities. This discrete and abrupt change in the fortunes of the Company marked the start of two hundred years of British imperial rule in India. It also was the occasion for the reorganization and reform of the institutions through which the British gradually strengthened the interests of the home authorities in the administration of Indian affairs. (de Schweinitz 86)
This success along with the division of power amongst Indian princess at the time created the perfect situation for the British Empire to take control. Another problem during this time was the British Empires massive scope of territories to which they had political and economic influence. During the 19th century other Eastern Asian countries such as Thailand and China shared in the British Empires disdain and oppression/opposition of Indian citizens. “The Thai encapsulated their attitude toward South Asians in a popular saying, still much quoted: ‘On your way, if you come across a snake and an Indian, kill the Indian first’” (Kratoska 172). During such an oppressing setting as this the Indian Independence Movement, and more specifically Mahatma Gandhis’ peaceful outlooks on rhetoric in social movements took quite some time to develop, however it could be argued that this oppression also fueled and inspired Gandhi’s teachings.
            Mohandas Gandhi born October 2, 1869 would later become a national figure and leader for the Indian Independence movement. During his early years Gandhi studied law England and later practiced this law in South Africa, where he faced prejudice and racism. The culmination of these events led him back to India in 1915 where “the reins of the nationalist movement of which he had only been a distant spectator were to fall into his hands, and were to remain with him until his death” (Nanda 141). Gandhi made his ideals very clear from the beginning, to gain full independence from the British Empire through peaceful and non-violent acts of protest and rhetoric. As stated by B.R. Nanda “He was heading a mass struggle, the avowed purpose of which was to end alien rule. It was an open rebellion, even though a ‘non-violent’ one” (Nanda 186). During his movement he made it clear that he was protesting the treatment of British ruled Indians, however he himself did not hold resentment against the British for driving Indian society and culture down. Instead he believed that it was the fault of Western culture carrying on the idea and beliefs of ruling over another people.
Gandhi was not ignorant of the origins and the basis of the British rule in India. In Hind Swaraj he had given a merciless analysis of Indian history. The East India Company’s victories he had attributed to the divisions of the Indian princes. He had criticized Pax Brittanica; the peace was in name only, as it had emasculated the Indian nation and made it cowardly. The railways, the law courts and the educational system had all served to tighten the stranglehold of the occupying power. This was a scathing indictment of British rule, but the moral he drew from it was novel: India was ground down not by the British rule but by Western civilization which had perpetuated that rule. (Nanda 187-188)
            Although Gandhi did not resent the British for the issues and inequalities they had created, he was still able to acknowledge that what was happening to India was not in any way right. These issues included unfair taxes on lower caste Indian citizens, as well voting rights for only the top wealthiest Indian citizens. This inequality created the racial resentment held by the British Empire and this is exactly what Gandhi was fighting against, “As Thomas Munro pointed out, there had been foreign conquerors who had been more violent and more cruel, but none had treated Indians with such secret scorn as the British, by stigmatizing ‘the whole people as unworthy of trust’ (Nanda 141).
            Over the course of this rhetoric movement the protest development occurs over two phases; the inception phase; and the rhetorical crisis phase. Due to the fact that this protest movement occurred over a span of decades, the events that occurred can be categorized into these two categories most effectively. Once Gandhi became involved in the movement in 1915 the phase of inception began as the Mahatma began to share and enact his new found ideals of peaceful civil disobedience and protest. This alone sparked a movement for India’s independence one which strove for peaceful resolutions above all else. As the movement progressed and gained notoriety, Gandhi was able to successfully draw the eye of the world to the injustices occurring within India, for example with the Salt March of 1930, Gandhi successfully organized a protest march against Britain’s salt taxes, a march in which Gandhi led followers from Ahmedabad to Dandi on the shore to create their own salt. After being brutally harassed by British policemen while protesting peacefully, the British withdrew themselves and called this event a stalemate, shortly after changing the Salt taxes to more reasonable prices.

Rhetorical Context
            At the beginning of the 1900’s a self-aware India began to emerge from the shadow that was British Imperialism. In 1915 Gandhi returned to India after having spent 21 years in the South African colonies under British rule, these 21 year changed Gandhi and “his exposure to the injustices experienced by Indian indentured labour would prove to have a radicalizing effect” (McLaughlan 431). As Robbie McLaughlan goes onto explain, it was during this time after his return that Gandhi began to develop his philosophies of passive resistance,
The philosophy of passive resistance was given the name satyagraha (satya, truth; agraha, insistence) … For Gandhi, satyagraha represents an absolute refusal to legitimise the presence of Europeans in colonial territories (McLaughlan 431-432).
As McLaughlan explains, satyagraha represented everything that the people of India (including Gandhi) wanted to instill and represent, as well as representing the ideals that they would never accept. During this time Indian culture was being suffocated by imperialistic pressure placed on it by the British Empire, their customs, language, way of life were all dying out to be replaced by Western ideologies and practices. It is from this problem that Gandhi’s protest started for the independence of Indian citizens under British Control. As mentioned above Gandhi’s movement felt no need to accept the presence of Europeans in colonial territories, and took on the ideals and beliefs to essentially be as polar opposite as possible to the British and Western Ideals. McLaughlan stipulates that in Gandhi’s mind violence was a “…European tradition that is fundamentally alien to indigenous Indian culture. Violence is inherently European, so to react to violence with yet more violence is an act of legitimizing the logic and presence of the foreign invader” (McLaughlan 432). Under these ideals, individuals under this movement believed that any violence used would be a direct personification of the subjugation they had experienced. Thus the core ideals and identities of the protest are shown; first, that peaceful civil disobedience is to always be used in the face of violent oppressors, and two, that the use of violence to accomplish a goal, stains the credibility by which you have achieved said goal and furthers the process of colonization through the assimilation of the oppressor’s culture.
            Although there have been many historical accounts of violent revolts yielding desired outcomes for the parties enacting them, the identities that Gandhi’s instilled in his teachings attempted to show that a passive, satyagraha approach to handling a violent adversary can yield the same if not better results. The argument that McLaughlin makes in his journal is one to support the idea that as compared to James Connolly’s violent beliefs on how to gain independence for Ireland from an imperialistic British Empire in the early 20th century, Gandhi’s methods of civil-disobedience and non-violence were more effective in disrupting and stopping the Imperial British Empires reign.
In refusing to endorse violence, Gandhi establishes a dynamic of conflict between the colonized and the colonizer that completely disrupts the established order of being. In doing so, passive resistance ruptures the logic of late nineteenth- and early twentieth-century British imperialism in a way that is significantly more traumatic than the militarism adopted by Pearse and Connolly… Žižek contends that… ‘What Gandhi did, although it was very peaceful but in a way extremely violent, was to boycott customs, etc. He targeted the entire structure of the British Colonial State’. The Indian nationalists, shaped in the image of Gandhi, were successful precisely because they targeted the basic functions of the British Colonial State as opposed to engaging the British in an uneven military conflict (McLaughlan 343-434).
            During the fight for independence, Gandhi’s movement clearly voiced their rhetorical goals, which were to fight the injustices that the British Empire was imposing through the use of non-violent civilly disobedient acts, such as refusing the payment of taxes, making their own clothes, and even making their own salt. These acts of civil disobedience were effective in that because the members of this movement were acting non-violently, any violence inflicted upon them while peacefully protesting made the British appear harsh and cruel to the outside world. This concept is the main idea behind satyagraha and is what makes it effective in resisting violent colonizers. The notion that using non-violent protest methods actually works against violent reformation is exactly the end the result that Gandhi’s movement wanted to shed light upon.
            Civil disobedience as an act of protest is the main rhetorical goal of this movement, however this differs slightly from the legislative, social, and political goals of Gandhi’s movement. Although these goals are similar to the rhetorical goal in the sense that all the goals involve independence from British rule, they differ in the idea that rhetorically Gandhi wanted his followers to ideologically stay away and independent from British/Western influence. Whereas the legislative, social, and political goals of Gandhi’s movement were to become completely independent from Britain and become their own self governing body so as to create their own influence. The difference in these goals is ideological, where one is a state of mind and one is a tangible achievement.
            During Gandhi’s independence movement a key factor to the success of his protests was the context in which each was placed. The reason context plays such an important role is because within certain contexts, Gandhi’s non-violent forms of protest would not be affective, for example if the end goal of a violent entity or country is to eradicate another people, it would most likely not be in the best interest of those ‘people’ to just peacefully lay back and allow them to succeed in eradicating them. However, under the circumstances of a violent oppressive imperialistic force, the context is perfect for Gandhi’s methodology due the oppressors want to stay and maintain a presence/ruling over the resources and people within the colonized nation by using force, and fear. The difference between the two contexts in a broader scope is that under one context the oppressing force has no remorse for the actions they inflict upon the oppressed and only care about their end goals, whereas in the other context the oppressing force must take into consideration remorse, as well as outside speculation on the actions they commit as a ‘parent’ nation.

            The methodology that Gandhi used, and the movement that he started was a revolutionary thought at the time and gained publicity worldwide. This in part helped to support Gandhi’s movement by shedding light (globally) on the social inequities and injustices occurring to colonialized Indians. It also brought Gandhi’s followers closer together under the unified cause of satyagraha when placed under the global spotlight. And ultimately Gandhi’s teachings inspired individuals to be proud and to be determined in holding fast to a non-violent form of protest. 

Analysis of a Movement Artifact
            While looking at Mahatma Gandhi’s philosophy of satyagahra, the most important aspect to take note of is the non-violent approach to civil disobedience. Gandhi was known for his non-violent work in civil rights for Indians against British Colonialism, however one of his most notable demonstrations/act of civil disobedience was “The Salt March to the remote sea-side village of Dandi” (Weber, 46). This demonstration took place in 1930 and was a message to the British Empire that the citizens of India were tired of the unfair salt taxes, and that to protest them, they would make their own salt and boycott British manufactured salt. “And this was to be done by breaking the iniquitous salt laws that meant that even the poorest laborer who sweated under a hot Indian sun could not gather natural salt to supplement the most meagre of diets without paying exorbitant taxes” (Weber, 46-47).
            A protest event such as this represented Gandhi and his followers’ identities perfectly. The Mahatma preached non-violent approaches to all conflicts, therefore a march and boycott to protest government policies held fast to the identities that they were attempting to evoke. Although the British were the main targets that Gandhi was attempting to influence during this march, he also faced problems amongst the followers that he gained while performing these demonstrations. For example, author Thomas Weber recounts an experience that Gandhi had while still marching to the Dandi,
On the ninth day, at the village of Gajera, Gandhi continued his living sermon. A dais had been erected under a large banyan tree for Gandhi’s afternoon speech. Four to five thousand people sat patiently waiting for the Mahatma to tell them about the iniquities of the salt tax and the evils of British rule, but the ever punctual Gandhi just sat on the platform and waited. And waited. Tension increased. For the first time during the march, untouchables had been prohibited from sitting with the rest of the audience. Gandhi instructed his followers to sit among the excluded and finally announced: ‘This meeting has not yet started…. Either you invite the untouchables and my volunteers to sit freely among you or I’ll have to address you from the hill where they are sitting.’ (Weber, 48)
Due to the influence of British colonialism, the caste system was much more enforced, believed, and upheld. Because of this, individuals within Gandhi’s following who came from a higher caste level unknowingly aimed to destroy Gandhi’s cause if they still held on to their belief in the caste system. Gandhi’s philosophy of satyagraha represents peaceful civil disobedience, however it also represents Gandhi’s desire to liberate and separate from all British ties, beliefs, and western influences as well as creating equality for every single Indian individual, high caste and untouchables alike. Thus the introduction of individuals who still supported British doctrines or beliefs, even unknowingly, severely challenged Gandhi and his movements goals and identities. Not only was he having to physically protest against British acts of inequity, but he was also having to fight the hold that British colonialism had taken over brainwashed high caste members who thought themselves superior in some way. “It was becoming dark on the last part of the journey so a pressurized petromax lantern was lit. The servant carrying the lantern was prodded to walk faster to keep up with the Mahatma. Gandhi saw what was happening – a lowly local being mistreated by a prominent nationalist” (Weber, 49). As Gandhi dealt with these incidents and inspired change in individuals who still held to these principles, he was representing and evoking his movements identity. By standing up for all his followers, and showing forgiveness in times of turmoil during the Salt March, Gandhi was able to effectively influence his followers that the road to a unified and free India started with accepting all members of one’s society as equal.
            Gandhi was also effective in his use of pathos throughout the Salt March, by utilizing his method of non-violent civil disobedience Gandhi and his followers were able to evoke from the world a feeling of sympathy for themselves. Due to the fact that they were protesting non-violently as they met confrontation from British officials in Dandi, they were seen as victims from a ‘big bad’ British Empire after thousands of Indians were jailed including Gandhi, for making their own salt. This use of pathos and emotional connection, was very important in helping to support Gandhi’s identity of satyagraha, without the sympathy that was gained though its use, satyagraha would ultimately be ineffective in promoting the change it seeks.
            When speaking in terms of rhetorical context, the Salt March was precisely the type of situation that Gandhi and his movement looked for in utilizing their rhetoric strategy effectively.

The context in which the protest was placed was ideal for showing the effectiveness of Gandhi and his movements identity, by utilizing the heartstring on the global eye to show people the inequalities and mistreatment that Indians were facing at the time under British colonial rule. 

1. Is the identity that I am researching clear? Is there anything you think I should add to clarify it?
2. Are my use of resources effective and do they add to my overall paper?
3. What areas specifically do you think need the most work?
             
Works Cited
Chenoweth, Erica. "Civil Resistance: Reflections On An Idea Whose Time Has Come." Global
Governance 20.3 (2014): 351-358. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Fernée, Tadd. "Gandhi And The Heritage Of Enlightenment: Non-Violence, Secularism And
Conflict Resolution." International Review Of Sociology 24.2 (2014): 309-324. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Ferrari, Michel, et al. "Why Is Gandhi Wise? A Cross-Cultural Comparison Of Gandhi As An
Exemplar Of Wisdom." Journal Of Adult Development 23.4 (2016): 204-213. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Gupta, R.C. Indian Freedom Movement and Thought: Nehru and the Politics of ‘Right’ versus
‘Left’ (1930-1947). Sterling Publishers, 1983.
McLaughlan, Robbie. "Connolly, Gandhi And Anticolonial (Non)Violence." Irish Studies
Review 24.4 (2016): 430-440. Humanities International Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Nanda, B.R. Mahatma Gandhi. Oxford University Press, 28 Oct. 1989.
Phibbs, Cheryl. The Montgomery Bus Boycott: A History and Reference Guide. Greenwood,
2009.
Raina, Vinod. "Political Diversity, Common Purpose: Social Movements In India." Inter-Asia
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Scalmer, Sean. Gandhi in the West: The Mahatma and the Rise of Radical Protest. Cambridge
University Press, 2011.
de Schweinitz, Karl, Jr. The Rise and Fall of British India: Imperialism as inequality. Methuen,
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Weber, thomas. "Grandhiam Nonviolence And The Salt March." Social Alternatives 21.2 (2002): 46-51. Political Science Complete. Web. 7 Nov. 2016





Wednesday, November 2, 2016

Paragraph Style - Colin McCormick.

During this act of defiance both Smith and Carlos were attempting to show the world and bring to light the discrimination and inequality in the United States at the time of the historical Civil Rights Movement. The two athletes “wore gloves to represent black America, and removed their shoes and wore black socks to symbolize the poverty of the African black community” (Simon Burnton, Paragraph 6). By acting out in such a manner on global television, the two athletes were able to reach millions of people with their message of black power in America. This act was met with severe criticism from the white community, and viewed as un-patriotic, the two athletes were kicked off of the United States. track and field team, as well as sent home and banned from the Olympics (Cosgrove Paragraph 3). The shaming of these two individuals continued in the United States among the white community, however the African American community greeted them as heroes who sacrificed their glory on national television for the greater cause of civil equality.

2. The real character of focus within this paragraph is 'black power'
3. The purpose of this paragraph is to inform the reader of the events that transpired during this protest, and the outcomes that they had on the characters being discussed. 


Tuesday, October 25, 2016

Annotated Bibliography

Annotated Bibliography
Primary Sources
Gupta, Partha Sarathi. Towards freedom: documents on the movement for independence in India, 1943-1944. Oxford University Press, 1997.
Secondary Sources
Chenoweth, Erica. "Civil Resistance: Reflections On An Idea Whose Time Has Come." Global
Governance 20.3 (2014): 351-358. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Serious News Article: Erica Chenoweth published this academic journal in 2014 to take a look at the civil disobedience that has been occurring since the end of the Cold War and just how effective these forms of protest have been. The author develops her thesis by explaining that without the civil resistance movements, the world we live in today would be completely different, thus laying out her platform that civil resistance was monumental in shaping the world. The author hopes to explain to her audience the significance of the events and actions that transpired for civil disobedience in the time after the Cold War and how they shape today. The authors intended audience seems to be anyone unaware of civil resistance movements, she establishes a connection with this group by defining and explaining her key terms and points.
Fernée, Tadd. "Gandhi And The Heritage Of Enlightenment: Non-Violence, Secularism And
Conflict Resolution." International Review Of Sociology 24.2 (2014): 309-324. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Serious News Article: Tadd Fernée published his academic journal in July of 2014, to discuss how Gandhi radically changed the Enlightenment tradition, through his contribution by means of values, and his theories of knowledge. The author develops this theory by arguing that Gandhi was much more nuanced and level headed than historical context dictates, and that this effected his outcome on the Enlightenment tradition. The authors purpose is to convince the audience that Gandhi was indeed very level headed and serious when it came to civil formation issues. The authors intended audience appears to be peer scholars, through the use of technical terms and phrases as well as their large use of scholarly references.
Ferrari, Michel, et al. "Why Is Gandhi Wise? A Cross-Cultural Comparison Of Gandhi As An
Exemplar Of Wisdom." Journal Of Adult Development 23.4 (2016): 204-213. Academic Search Alumni Edition. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Serious News Article: Michael Ferrari published this scholarly journal in September of 2016, to discuss the cross cultural differences that the teachings of Mahatma Gandhi have taken on since his passing and how he has become a renowned world figure for wisdom. The author develops this idea by going over the set of interviews he conducted between three different populations dealing with what each culture emphasized most about Gandhi. In this journal the author is hoping to provide enough evidence to the audience to prove that Mahatma Gandhi was as wise as people say he was and to show how he still has an influence on people of today. The intended audience of the author is anyone that is interested in finding out more about how cultural differences change individual’s perceptions of significant figures in the world.
Gupta, R.C. Indian Freedom Movement and Thought: Nehru and the Politics of ‘Right’ versus
‘Left’ (1930-1947). Sterling Publishers, 1983.
Historical Context: R.C. Gupta published this writing in 1983 to discuss the relation between Gandhi and one of his followers and how those interactions shaped his follower’s thoughts and ideas. The author develops this thesis by siting historical documents showing proof of the actions he is describing taking place. In book the author is hoping to show the relationship between Nehru and Gandhi and how those interactions played off of one another. The intended audience of this book is anyone interested in learning about the interactions that Gandhi had during his life and how those interactions played a huge role in shaping who he was.
McLaughlan, Robbie. "Connolly, Gandhi And Anticolonial (Non)Violence." Irish Studies
Review 24.4 (2016): 430-440. Humanities International Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Serious News Article: Robbie McLaughlan published this scholarly article in September of 2016 to discuss the different ways in which Ireland and India handled anti-colonialism and how Gandhi’s method of non-violence turned out to be more disruptive than James Connolly’s idea of violence as a means to fight back. McLaughlin develops this idea through his description of the changes that both men were able to achieve over the course of their given anti-colonial movement and then goes on to explain why Gandhi’s non-violent protests gained more attention and were more effective in enacting change. The authors purpose in writing this journal is to inform the audience of the different attempts to fight colonialism that occurred during this time and to show how the peaceful method was more effective in creating change to a social movement. The authors intended audience appears to be peer scholars, he is able to establish a connection with them through his use of scholarly references and historical facts that one outside of the field may not necessarily know.
Phibbs, Cheryl. The Montgomery Bus Boycott: A History and Reference Guide. Greenwood,
2009.
Protest Context: Cheryl Phibb’s published this book in 2009 to talk about the importance significance of the Montgomery bus boycotts. The author develops his thesis by talking about how the success of the bus boycotts was miraculous and an event to be looked at by anyone hoping to spark social change. The authors purpose in writing this book was to inform individuals of the events and people involved within the Montgomery bus boycott. The intended audience being anyone that is interested in the civil rights movement/the Montgomery bus boycott.  
Raina, Vinod. "Political Diversity, Common Purpose: Social Movements In India." Inter-Asia
Cultural Studies 5.2 (2004): 320-327. Humanities International Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2016.
Serious News Article: Vinod Raina published this writing in 2004 to discuss in part how Gandhi’s thoughts and ideals have inspired movements and civil formations that are still active today. The author explains this phenomenon by naming active groups that still adhere to Ghandian principles. In this writing the author is attempting to explain how Gandhi’s ideals can be passed on through generations by active groups that still follow his teachings. The authors intended audience for this writing is anyone interested in learning about social change, she connects with that audience by talking about the different ways in which Gandhi enacted social change and how those actions still ring out today.
Scalmer, Sean. Gandhi in the West: The Mahatma and the Rise of Radical Protest. Cambridge
University Press, 2011.
Community/identity: Sean Scalmer published his book in 2011 to discuss how non-violent civil disobedience grew in Britain and the United States as committed members from Gandhi’s movement spread the word. The author develops this thesis by describing the interactions between activists in Britain and the U.S. between the 1920’s and 1960’s. The authors purpose in writing this is to convince the audience that there is a correlation between the growth of non-violent civil disobedience that was occurring in Britain and the U.S. The authors intended audience is anyone interested in the social changes occurring globally around the introduction of civil disobedience.
de Schweinitz, Karl, Jr. The Rise and Fall of British India: Imperialism as inequality. Methuen,
1983.
Karl de Schweinitz Jr. wrote this book in 1983 to go over the role that British imperialism played in India during the Indian Independence Movement. He develops this by talking about the history and major events throughout British imperialism in India. The authors purpose is to inform the audience that without this imperialism India would have not developed in the ways that it has. The authors intended audience is anyone who wants to know more about British imperialism and the impact it had on India.



                                                      

Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Annotated Bibliograhy Precis

Precis


Quarterly Journal published "Environmental Melodrama" by Steven Schwarze in 2006, to illustrate the relevance of melodrama as a rhetorical tool and the particular scenarios in which it is successful. Schwarze analyzes the effect of melodrama within the scope of environmental issues and shows the ways in which it may be effective. Schwarze claims that a common misconception about melodrama is that it is ineffective because it oversimplifies and prevents unification, however, identification of two distinct positions can sometimes be beneficial to an argument with obscured intentions. This is particularly relevant to scholars involved in rhetoric, particularly those against the use of (excessive) ethos/melodrama in an argument, by use of (1) scholarly terminology and (2) reference to reknowned rhetors. 

Monday, October 17, 2016

Peacful Protest, Indian independence movement - Research Question

How was Gandhi's (and Gandhi's followers) identity of peaceful civil disobedience effective in the movement for Indian independence, and what effects has it had on society today?

Anti-Globalization Topic Exploration

1. This protest is on a global scale, therefore I would like to draw boundaries around protests held by this organization in the United States. That being said I am also going to open up this project to any protests held by this group since their formation. Examples of these protests could be the 1999 Seattle WTO (World Trade Organization) protests,  or the 2000 Washington IMF (International Monetary Fund) protests.

2. The identity that these individuals share is opposition to large multi-national corporations. This is the key idea that binds this group together, therefore this identity is very significant to the protest movement and the individuals who are apart of it.

3. They participated by attending prominent events for corporations and groups such as the WTO and IMF to protest and speak out against social and economic injustices that these multi-national corporations get away with.

4. When looking at the protest group/movement, there are concerns that come to mind. First, I am worried most about the amount of materials available to use for research, seeing as this is a fairly recent protest movement, I am worried that the amount of scholarly sources available will not be sufficient to write a research paper of this length. I am also worried about connecting the identity with the protest, due to the fact that there is does not seem to be sub-groups within the protest. This makes it difficult to discern or identify a "group" that participated. I think the most difficult part of this project will be narrowing down what group and group identity I am focusing on, and then finding specific credible research to back up my claims.

Wednesday, October 12, 2016

Anti-Globalization

Who/What?: This is a group of people dedicated to fighting big corporations and the ideals they stand for. These individuals believe that global financial organizations such as the World Trade Organization (WTO) and the International Monetary Fund (IMF) use their power to get away with things that small businesses could not, such as move freely across borders, extract desired natural resources, access to wide selection of human resources, as well as cutting costs to make money in turn for hazardous work environments in overseas warehouses.

When?: This group has been protesting since the late 80's

Where? Across the world.

Why?: They do it to fight the social injustices that big corporations get away with because of their money and stature.

This group fights to stop big corporations from being able to get a away with terrible injustices on a global scale. The identity they all share is wanting equality from an overpowered upper class, that uses their power to do whatever they want. Examples of this could be Nike "allegedly" using sweatshops Taiwan and South Korea, a big corporation using its ridiculous amount of money to cut costs and increase profit at the expense of hazardous underpaid sweatshops.