Friday, September 16, 2016

Brexit protests - Potter

Rhetorical Analysis of a Protest Object
Colin Potter
Pro-European campaigners protest against the result of the EU referendum outside Parliament Square, London
            On June 23, 2016, citizens throughout Great Britain flocked to the polls to vote in a referendum on whether to leave the European Union, or to stay. After votes were cast, the world was shocked by the results, and Great Britain’s decision to leave the EU. The European Stock Market crashed, and the British Pound dropped to its lowest value in decades. However, leaving the EU has many more consequences than what has been seen since the vote, and the ones who will be most negatively affected by the decision are Great Britain’s youth, the ones whose future relies on the benefits of EU membership, such as the freedom to travel and work throughout Europe with ease. Leaving the EU will mean that the broad horizons many once looked towards for the future will become much narrower, lacking in the opportunities given to EU members that have benefitted those before them.
It is through this context that the identity this sign represents is defined. Brexit will create a generation of young adults, of millennials, who no longer have the opportunities that those before them have had, and this fact separates them from other citizens of Great Britain. This identity has become defined through the opportunities no longer available to these young adults.
            In the wake of the Brexit decision, protests, like the one shown in the photo above, began in England. Particularly interesting within this context is the message held by two young women, protesting the decision. The sign is fairly simple, reading in all caps, “You stole our future from us.” “You,” in this sign directs the statement towards politicians and voters in favor of Brexit, those responsible for the referendum’s outcome. By being shown at a publicly visible protest, this sign is meant to be read by passersby, all Great Britain, and throughout the world, not just by those responsible for the decision, making the audience larger than just those whom the sign addresses. By targeting a wider audience, the sign establishes the identity of the “we,” for this audience: young adults, such as those holding the sign, who are adversely affected by the Brexit.
            It is the context in which this sign is displayed, combined with its audience and the message on the sign that allows this protest object to effectively establish the identity it does. With this in place, the purpose of the sign becomes much clearer. The young people pictured are using a variety of rhetorical techniques in this sign to express dissent for the decision, to push for a change in the consequences of the referendum, and to call out those who they view have negatively impacted their future. A petition for a second referendum reached 2 million signatures as this protest was occurring, revealing that the individuals involved with the sign and the protest were likely pushing for a nullification of the referendum, a second referendum, or another way to prevent the consequences Brexit will have on the future of Britain’s youth. Beyond this implicit call for action, this sign utilizes an appeal to pathos to condemn the kind of anti-immigration, racist arguments and beliefs that were largely responsible for the result of the referendum, and explicitly call out the consequences of these beliefs. It sends a message directly towards the “You,” or those responsible for the result, that their vote, and by extension their beliefs, are going to negatively impact millions of citizens in Great Britain.

            “You stole our future from us,” primarily appeals to pathos and logos, to call out the beliefs and people responsible for Brexit, convey dissent with the referendum decision, and influence people to push for a way to stop Brexit. All of these goals give a voice to the identity of British youth who will be adversely affected by Brexit. The main appeal this object makes is to pathos, however logos and ethos appeals are also involved as subtle rhetorical strategies.
            Upon examination of everything from the context to the physical message of the sign, an appeal to ethos is barely visible. The appeal to ethos is not utilized, but the concept that young people would know which opportunities are needed in today’s world to succeed, so they must know if their future has been stolen can be viewed as a slight appeal to ethos. Although limited in scope and impact, “You stole our future from us,” appeals to logos. It does not explicitly lay out the logical argument that forms the foundation of the claim, instead the argument is implicit, making the audience to think through it after grabbing their attention with forceful and impactful accusatory language. By allowing the audience think through the logic behind the accusation, it appeals to logos in an unconventional way. The logical argument is not explicit, but it is in the claim’s justification, making this appeal to logos more memorable because it must be worked out by each individual in the audience. However, this appeal may be lost among some members of the target audience, as those who are not aware of the benefits of EU membership (the 2nd most common Google search on Brexit following the vote was, “What is the EU?”) and those who disagree and may be unwilling to think through the logic of the claim may miss out on this appeal. This does not mean that the appeal is ineffective, rather that it is more effective among some of the audience and less effective on others.
            By far the greatest appeal of this object is to pathos. The phrase, “You stole our future from us,” written in all caps is accusatory, immediately invoking an emotional response from both the accused and the rest of the audience. Regardless of the initial response of either anger or sympathy, it serves the purpose of drawing in the audience. The second appeal to pathos is designed to humanize those negatively impacted by the decision. It gives light to a collective narrative of the decision’s consequences and feelings about those consequences, one that is designed to make the result not just about facts but about the people affected. It brings the impact the decision will have on real young adults to the forefront, emphasizing the reality of the decision’s consequences. “You stole our future from us,” sends a message that the prejudices and fear that influenced the rhetoric around the referendum, and that influenced the referendum’s decision, have had real consequences on young adults in Great Britain, and that those who were a part of this are to blame.
            This object reveals the identity of a generation who will be affected by Brexit, and at the same time attacks the rhetoric and people responsible for the decision. Its purpose was to influence efforts to reverse the decision, express dissent, and humanize the consequences of the referendum utilizing appeals to pathos. While the extent to which protests and messages such as this influence Britain’s policy have yet to be known, “You stole our future from us,” succeeds in humanizing millennials affected by Brexit and in being a part of the dissent felt throughout Britain for this decision.



Works Cited:
Dean, Jon. "Anti-Brexit Protests See Hundreds on the Streets in London and Scotland as Petition for Second Referendum Passes 2 MILLION - Mirror Online." Mirror. N.p., June 2016. Web. 10 Sept. 2016.

Selyukh, Alina. "After Brexit Vote, Britain Asks Google: 'What Is The EU?'" NPR. NPR, 24 June 2016. Web. 10 Sept. 2016.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Colin, I think this is a really good start, but there are also definitely a lot of places that left me a little confused. At the beginning, I wasn’t quite sure about the entirety of the context given about the object. You talked about the decision of Brexit and its consequences in the first few paragraphs which was great, in your analysis you talk about the racial discrimination and potential underlying desires of the people who voted for Brexit, which you hadn’t really covered in the context. As you brought up the section about the pathos and how the people who voted for Brexit were anti-immigration and held racist beliefs and arguments, this was the first time you brought up these issues. Maybe adding a little bit more background to the desires and beliefs of those who were voting for and against Brexit before getting into the appeals would make it much stronger it my opinion.
    I think the audience is pretty well defined as well as the identity of those who are represented by the sign. The arguments of the “you” vs “Us” was well given in my opinion, but I feel like it could also be flushed out a little bit more. The implication of the word “Stole” might also be really strong for the appeal to pathos. It makes those who made this decision sound like criminals who have easily and obviously committed a wrongdoing.
    While the appeal to pathos was very good, I’m not sure if I was able to be even remotely persuaded by your given appels to ethos or logos. I would say logos would be more obvious if they had said “now that Brexit is here, we can’t do x, y, and z, and these things are required for us to do a, b, and c, to have healthy sustainable futures”. I feel like that “implicit appeal to logos” simply isn’t there. I would either seriously revise that section or simply leave it out. I feel like reading over that part, I began to question the verity of your appeals and your authority on the subject. I also feel that the appeal to ethos is so short and somewhat obscure that it also needs to be either heavily revised or simply removed.
    I think this needs some global revisions, but I think there is definitely a strong message in there which can be achieved. I think the appeal to pathos can be blown up way stronger. Having people go out in their homes and protest in such a public area with such a big sign in itself is also an appeal to pathos. It shows how these children care about this so much that they feel their lives have been taken away from them.

    Good luck Colin!

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  2. Hey Colin,

    I learned a great deal of information from your paper, but I have a few suggestions on how I think it could be improved. Starting off your paper, I think you should immediately introduce your object, which is the sign saying, “You stole our future from us.” Instead, after reading your introduction paragraph, I had no idea what your object of protest was. I only fully realized what your object was once I reached the beginning of the third paragraph. If the picture were not included in your essay, I would not have known what “the identity this sign represents” was that you reference in your second paragraph. I think your paper would start much stronger if you describe the sign, and then follow it up with the context you describe in the first paragraph.

    I also think your second paragraph could have more detail regarding the “millennials, who no longer have the opportunities that those before them have had.” What exactly are these opportunities that the young people are missing out on? I think adding even just a sentence or two regarding this would add more depth to your argument. I think your third paragraph has a good description of whom exactly the sign is targeting and who the audience is. In your fourth paragraph, you describe how “the young people pictured are using a variety of rhetorical techniques…to express dissent.” I am not sure I have a grasp on what exactly the rhetorical techniques are, and think these details should be added to better educate the reader.

    I agree with Farid that your arguments for ethos and logos are not persuasive and there should not be an assumption that there is an “implicit appeal to logos.” I think approaching how you are describing the appeals to ethos and logos differently would make for a much stronger argument and would keep your paper more fluid and less muddled. However, I thought your explanation of pathos was clear and persuasive.

    Each paragraph is organized around its topic sentence, so it made your paper easier to follow. I think your argument organization needs improvement with offering more evidence to support your claims, which I described above. Like Farid said, I also think there needs to be a couple global revisions, and you should definitely add more detail in regard to ethos and logos. Overall, this was a fascinating topic!

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  3. Colin,
    I want to start by saying that I agree with Farid, you have a good start here and you did a good job of identifying the audience and purpose of the protest. However, I am also going to agree with Farid in the fact that your paper is little difficult to follow.
    I think the context of Brexit needs to be explained just a little bit more. You mention that people voted to leave the EU and went into the consequences, but you never really explain the reasons they were voting to leave in the first place. I think that it would help strengthen the paper if the reader could get a little more context around Brexit and why it was so controversial.
    Additionally, I think that your explanations of ethos, pathos and logos needs just a little more work. Namely, you mention that the protest uses ethos, pathos and logos (last sentence in the 5th paragraph) but then in the very next paragraph you say that ethos was not used. I think you should either take out any mention of ethos as a tool, or elaborate further on how "You stole our future" utilizes ethos.
    Something else you might want to mention is that the audience might in particular, be older voters. A majority of the people who voted to leave the EU were older voters, and the exit would not have affected them as much as the youth of the nation. ““ You Stole Our Future From Us” takes on a larger meaning if its young vs old and not just left vs. right.
    Organization wise I think that the overall organization, with the first part being context and background and the second part analysis, is well down. I would be sure to double check that you are using strong topic sentences. The last paragraph of the essay seems to be lacking one.
    I think your paper needs some global editing, but you have a great start here. Keep up the good work!

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  4. Revision Plan:
    • Global revisions to the context section:
    o Give more detail about the context of Brexit, including the perceptions that were circulating in the few days following the vote.
    o Begin with the actual protest object and move on to context afterwards to better direct the argument.
    o Address the rhetoric of the referendum campaign to further establish the discontent of voters post-referendum.
    o Discuss older vs. younger voter demographics as well and address the disparities between the affected and relatively unaffected groups.
    • Revise ethos and logos:
    o Revisions to these sections so that they are not overstated.
    • Revise pathos section:
    o Include a stronger connection between evidence and ideas to strengthen the argument.
    o Include a bit of analysis on the specific word “stole” in the protest object.
    • Overall, global revisions to the beginning of the essay, which should lead to smaller revisions in the analysis of rhetorical techniques.

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